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Twisted, taunted thoughts
of a deeply disturbed mind.
She's waiting for you.
Ever thought, on the other side
Ever seen them staring?
She has... she has.
Every breath, is another death
Every twitch, is pain.
She sees it all.
Silenced by the crowd, crushed by the world
Ever thought like her?
No one has
No one is there, to pick her up
Her broken thoughts spilt on the floor.
How can she be wrong?
Now when consumed
Of unatural sorts
Her mind will twist again
She's falling down a rabbit hole
Into a world of the unknown
Joy seeping through every blow.
When snapped back to reality
Everything is still
She likes the quiet right up until
A slam a scream a smack
She's down
Out like a light
Another night, just like the last
A substance can mean the world
To a girl in need of ..................
Can't you see her smiling?
A distant murmer
She once was.... no more
A different mind.. ended by a different stroke
©2005-2010 ~MadDHatT3r
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Author's Comments

Model: MEEE
Photographer: Myself
Edited in photoshop
poem: me being my odd self

erm.. yea :sprint: :paranoid:

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:iconsodasuicide:
very good poem!

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:iconmaddhatt3r:
Thanks :)

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All hail::: Merlin Franky Sanchez!
:iconredbigtex:
Oh oh got me all tingly. :) good one.

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:iconmaddhatt3r:
lol tingly eh? fuuuuuuuun ;p

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:iconredbigtex:
yeah kinda like so.....:excited: A version of a * joygasm*

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:iconmaddhatt3r:
joygasm eh? lol fuuuuuuuuun i wish i had more joygasm.. those are fuuuuuuun!

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:nirvana: the forgotten soul :nirvana:

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:iconzylie:
heh very good poem deep deep meaning love it :hug: you never suprise me
:iconmaddhatt3r:
i never surprise you? ;p awsome!.. i think :O

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:iconzylie:
yea yo do a lot your work is so original and cool that i am so wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooow that i am suprised every day im sry if i made ya feel bad

:( my bad

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